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Before reading the Philosophical Investigations: a Necessary Context

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Title: PR of Reading Philosophical Investigations by JWSchmidt
Author: JWSchmidt[1]
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  1. ^  JWSchmidt is the wikicities username of John Schmidt. --JWSchmidt 02:39, 8 Aug 2005 (UTC)
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Scope: Complete. I have read Philosophical Investigations but not Tractatus Logico-Philosophicus. I think this will make me a reasonable reviewer of the article; able to judge if the article provides useful background information to someone who wishes to read Philosophical Investigations without first reading earlier works by Wittgenstein.
Date started: August 7, 2005.
Estimated completion date: August 21, 2005.

Summary

I have previosly read read Wittgenstein's Philosophical Investigations, parts of Wittgenstein's Tractatus, some secondary sources that discuss Wittgenstein's philosophy, and none of Wittgenstein's other books. I found the article Before reading the Philosophical Investigations: a Necessary Context by Robert Parr to be a useful introduction to Philosophical Investigations. I feel that the article should be accepted for formal publication by the Language Journal. The author should adequately reply to the list of suggestions for modifications to the article (below) prior to formal publication.

Critique

The following suggestions are intended to improve the article.

Abstract

1) The abstract is rather short. It mentions the transition of Wittgenstein's philosophical thought (early vs later philosophy) but does not provide any information about the nature of the transition. The author should breifly describe what he views as the major change between Wittgenstein's early tractarian philiosophy and his later philosophy (PI). Maybe Wittgenstein's deeper thinking about infinity (after 1928) could be mentioned and the role that played in his later philosophy.

Assumptions

2) "One is that this natural life is the only life we have; the other is that there are only potential infinities in this finite universe."

Mention of these two assumptions, without any explanation, is rather enigmatic and distracting. I suggest that there a concise way to (in this section of the`article) to relate these "two assumptions" to what Wittgenstein wrote and what will come later in the article.

For example: 'We only know the infinite by description.' is mentioned later in the article and the role of Wittgenstein's thinking about infinity in the context of atomic facts is discussed. A sentence about this in the "assumptions" section would be useful.

The role of "this natural life" in Wittgenstein's philosophy is later mentioned in the context of "This explanation relied solely on the natural. There was no appeal to anything supernatural." A sentence could be inserted in the "assumptions" section about Wittgenstein's refusal to assume that people or the world were designed by God to make the world understandable.

In both cases, it should be clear in the "assumptions" section that these matters will be discussed in more detail later in the article.

Alternatively, if the author feels that these two added sentences would be too distracting, they could be placed in a footnote or the Appendix.

Mathematical Logic

3) "Principia Mathematica was really much more about language than about mathematics. It was an attempt to find a second order or derived language in symbolism that would do away with the ambiguities and vagaries of natural languages -language that seemed to hide and confuse the expressions of philosophy and logic."

This (above) can be contrasted with what is said at wikipedia:

"It is an attempt to derive all mathematical truths from a well-defined set of axioms and inference rules in symbolic logic."

and at the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy:

"Written as a defense of logicism (i.e., the view that mathematics is in some significant sense reducible to logic) the book was instrumental in developing and popularizing modern mathematical logic. It also served as a major impetus for research in the foundations of mathematics throughout the twentieth century. Next to Aristotle's Organon, it remains the most influential book on logic ever written."

Would it be fair to say that from the perspective of some mathematicians Principia Mathematica showed that much of mathematics can be formalized starting from a foundation in logic (if you assume that Canto'r set theory is valid) and raised the question: "how much of human thought, reasoning and philosophy can be formalized?" Did Wittgenstein feel that his Tractatus answered this question?

5.) "They are either valid forms or invalid for Truth and falsity can be in either valid or invalid propositions."

I find this sentence to be confusing. Maybe it could be replace by one sentence that explains "valid forms" and a second sentence that illustrates how a valid form can express a falsity.

Also, there are two "levels" at which logical propositions can be utilized. If the variables are left "free and unsubstituted" then the "statements of symbolic logic are so general that they can neither be true nor false." However, if specific "things" from the World are substituted for the variables, then there is a connection between the World and our thoughts that language is able to express with statements of fact, specifically, the language of logical propositions--- propositions that must be either true or false. Care must be taken in discussing these two "modes" in which logical propositions are discussed. Without such care, the reader will be baffled by alternating statements about logical propositions as

i) being neither true nor false

or

ii) that must be either true or false.

6.) "Content in natural language would be essential in his later philosophy. Much of what he came to call 'grammar' was the logic inherent in the content of words, phrases, and propositions."

Since you say, "It is useful here to point out that it is supposed not to matter what content---meaning---is plugged into the variables of propositions," I assumed that "content" in the context of natural language is used as slang for "semantic content" or "meaning". I agree that this assumption is problematical because Wittgenstein did use "grammar" in an unconventional way. I think you are correct to say that Wittgenstein thought of some of the "content" of words as being grammatical content, or, "content that governs the grammatical use of words." In natural language, there is not one collection of "logical atoms of semantic content" that are acted upon by an second distinct collection of syntactic or gramatical rules. Much of the "grammar" does exist in the "content" of words, phrases, and propositions.

7.) "It was only when Humanism looked for purely human explanations that it took over the assumptions that formed the assumption." My best guess is that the reader is to hold his breath until the next paragraph and that "the assumption" is "the belief that the world has been expressly made to be intelligible and describable by us." The "assumptions that formed the assumption" remain undisclosed.

The phrase "our language and its explanation of language" seems to say that "our language" has a built-in "explanation of language." Maybe Western Philosophy adopted a cultural "explanation of language" and expressed that explanation in language, but isn't that different than attributing an explanation to language itself?

An alternative to saying that "humanism" adopted the view that the world "just happens to be intelligible" is the possibility that it was natural to start by making use of Occam's Razor and other rules of thumb to help define a simple hypothesis about the nature of the world and why the world is intelligible. When this "simple hypothesis" was being formed, evolutionary accounts of how minds could naturally come to conform to reality were not available. If there really is only one logical hypothesis that can be the starting place for a naturalistic account of language, is it sensible to suggest that selecting that hypothesis was a culturally pre-determined adoption of a pre-existing religious belief?

8.) "change was explained in dualisms such as mind and matter, body and soul" This paragraph has several telegraphic nuggets like this (what were "Russell's otherworldly platonic assumptions"?). Maybe an example of such "change" could be placed in the Appendix.

9.) "atomic facts are like 'snarks'; impossible to find. Neither he nor Russell could cite a single example"

Is this contradicted by what comes next:

Picture Theory

"If you take the proposition, 'This is red' as a 'simple', the simples such as, 'This is blue' or, 'This is green', rely on the truth or falsity of the simple, 'This is red'."

Atomic facts are impossible to find but 'This is red' is an atomic proposition?

10.) “A statement cannot be concerned with the logic of the world"

It is not clear exactly how this (above) says what the world must be like.

According to Aimin Shen, Wittgenstein was trying to say that, "propositional language cannot represent what makes it possible." Are we to take this as meaning that the logic of the world exists prior to "statements" we may wish to make about it and we cannot expect to make statements about it? If "concerned with" means "about" (represents) then Wittgenstein's statement seems both like a statement about the logic of the world (a statement saying such statements are impossible?) and a statement born of the frustration of Wittgenstein's failure to find a workable formal system of logical atomism.

Alternatively, what makes a "statement" a "statement" is that we are asserting the truth or falsity of something. Does it make sense to try to assert the truth or falsity of "the logic of the world"? No. "The logic of the world" is independent of anything we may try to assert. All we can do is accept "the logic of the world," not try to discuss if it is true or false, the case or not the case.

Are we supposed to be ruling out some other alternative to "The logic of the world is prior to all that is truth and falsehood"? Could the "the logic of the world" be a creation of people trying to understand the world? How does Wittgenstein's position on the logic of the world "explain language"?

11.) "we required the ideal to be a reality" What ideal? Atomic facts?

The key issue would seem to be the relation between thought and the assumed logical field of atomic facts. Is this "logical field" to be concieved as something that auomatically constrains thought, like a mentalistic force that infuses thought with logic in the same way that a gravitational field constrains the movement of objects?

12.) "these two assumptions that atomic facts must be the explanation of how language works" Exactly what are the "two" assumptions?

Solipsism

13.) "The saying/showing distinction" is mentioned, but never clearly explained. Is the preceeding discussion of “A statement cannot be concerned with the logic of the world" to be taken as showing "the logic of the world" to be an example of something that can be shown but not said?

14.) "what solipsism means is quite correct" But what did Wittgenstein take "solipsism" to mean? That we have a special epistemological relationship to our "self"? That only our "self" exists?

I assume it is the epistemological claim, not the ontological claim that was of concern to Wittgenstein. We cannot think beyond our own self and the powers of thought generated by the self. We cannot speak of anything that is not contained in our thoughts, but we are aware of this limitation.

"our ability to see the logic in the world expressed as self-evident in the atomic facts and simples" Does this mean that Wittgenstein's theory demanded that we have a physiological/mental ability to to percieve "atomic facts and simples as self-evident" and so generate understanding of the world, even if we are unable to say what the "simples" are?

Logicism and Scientism

15.) "The development of Symbolic language"
There should be some transition from "symbolic logic" to "Symbolic language".

16.) In, "It would be a mistake to see this word, 'mystical', as being its logical, consistent and absurd conclusion,"
What is "its"?

The Beginning of the New as the Old Disappears

17.) According to the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy the 1928 lecture in Vienna ‘Mathematik, Wissenschaft und Sprache’ is ‘Mathematics, Science and Language’.

18.) The article about Wittgenstein at the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy by Ian Proops cites several published sources and unpublished quotations from Wittgenstein (some from Moore's notes from lectures Wittgenstein gave in 1932) concerning his abandonment of the picture theory. The first source is Wittgenstein's 1929 article Some remarks on Logical Form (This the article that was to have been presented to the Joint Session of the Aristotelian and Mind Society. Monk's biography of Wittgenstein, page 272.) where he comments on the need to have "numbers enter into the structure of atomic propositions." Once Wittgenstein allowed in numbers, he could not find logical reasons for excluding certain possible realities. Logic alone is not powerful enough to define the quantitative nature of reality. Physical reality is more complex than logic. Proops says, "This .... contradicts the Tractatus's idea that all necessity is logical necessity (6.37)".

The issues raise by Some remarks on Logical Form do seem catastrophic for the ability of logic to generate all of "the world", but I am left wondering why anyone could have had enough faith in the power of logic to think otherwise in the first place.

Proops also sites what seems to be an unpublished letter: "There is a most important mistake in [the] Tract[atus]…I pretended that [a] proposition was a logical product; but it isn't, because “…” don't give you a logical product. It is [the] fallacy of thinking 1 + 1 + 1 is a sum. It is muddling up a sum with the limit of a sum." (November 25, 1932 [CL?])

And, "There was a deeper mistake — confusing logical analysis with chemical analysis. I thought '(∃x).fx' is a definite logical sum, only I can't at the moment tell you which." (same "C" source)

This "deeper mistake" is certainly tied up with infinity, but I do not understand how it has application to the theory of Wittgenstein's Tractatus.

Bridge

19.) Is it Satzsystem or Satzsysteme?

20.) Is there a citation to Wittgenstein's first use of "Satzsystem". Philosophical Remarks?

21.) "The Satzsystem also meant that a major theme of the Tractatus, that, contra Frege, names have meaning and not sense." This is not a correct sentence.

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